Saturday, March 02, 2013

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Its Renku Saturday #31
revisit Renku Saturday #30

To tangle
or untangle the willow
it’s up to the wind
-- Chiyo-Ni (1703-1775)
(trans. Donegan & Isibashi)


language of the breeze
wind chimes this morning

--gillena cox


breeze whispers
a long ago Love
Love that never hurt me

--Lorraine Renaud, CA

10 comments:

Bill said...

That's a beautiful little ku, Gillena. "this morning" gives it an in-the-moment feeling.

Anonymous said...

very beautiful...I can hear the chimes, feel the breeze.

Magyar said...

__Such nice language, that of the "breeze," and yours that paints the scene. _m

Adelaide said...

I've been catching up on your posts for the past week. Love them all.

Adelaide

Out of Sight L said...

breeze whispers
a long ago Love
Love that never hurt me

Gillena Cox said...

Bill, i always appreciate your critiques, thank you

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Geraldine, thank you for dropping in

much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Adelaide, glad you dropped by


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Lorraine thank you, i'll edit and add your verse to the renku


much love...

Gillena Cox said...

Doug, thank you for your appreciation

much love...